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Wednesday, September 16, 2009

"One's Reflection"


Mr. Henry's office reflects that he is a busy man. His office shows that he has lots of work to do. The papers in front of him are disarranged which tell that he still has to work on them. The computer on his side is located just within his reach. His notebook and ballpens are on the top of his wooden, rectangular table where he can easily grab them to avoid consuming time. These prove how busy he is. Therefore, Mr. Henry's office reflects his current situation in life.

2 comments:

Carlo said...

he still have (SV disagreement)
works and work have different meaning. works is not the plural of work. These is plural so why use a singular verb proves? The conclusion shifted from Mr Henry to "one" we don't know.

Carlo said...

Still has SV disagreements:
1. he still have - he has
2. papers which tells - papers which tell